A Checklist for Clear Communication
Think of how often you communicate
with people during your day. You write emails, facilitate meetings, participate
in conference calls, create reports, devise presentations, debate with your
colleagues… the list goes on.
We can spend almost our entire day
communicating. So, how can we provide a huge boost to our productivity? We can
make sure that we communicate in the clearest, most effective way possible.
This
is why the 7 Cs of Communication are helpful. The 7 Cs provide a checklist for
making sure that your meetings , emails , conference calls , reports , and presentations are well constructed and clear – so your
audience gets your message.
According to the 7 Cs, communication
needs to be:
·
Clear.
·
Concise.
·
Concrete.
·
Correct.
·
Coherent.
·
Complete.
·
Courteous.
In this article, we look at each of
the 7 Cs of Communication, and we'll illustrate each element with both good and
bad examples.
1. Clear
When writing or speaking to someone,
be clear about your goal or message. What is your purpose in communicating with
this person? If you're not sure, then your audience won't be sure either.
To be clear, try to minimize the
number of ideas in each sentence. Make sure that it's easy for your reader to
understand your meaning. People shouldn't have to "read between the lines"
and make assumptions on their own to understand what you're trying to say.
Bad
Example
Hi
John,
I
wanted to write you a quick note about Daniel, who's working in your
department. He's a great asset, and I'd like to talk to you more about him when
you have time.
Best,
Skip
What is this email about? Well,
we're not sure. First, if there are multiple Daniels in John's department, John
won't know who Skip is talking about.
Next, what is Daniel doing,
specifically, that's so great? We don't know that either. It's so vague that
John will definitely have to write back for more information.
Last, what is the purpose of this
email? Does Skip simply want to have an idle chat about Daniel, or is there
some more specific goal here? There's no sense of purpose to this message, so
it's a bit confusing.
Good
Example
Let's see how we could change this
email to make it clear.
Hi
John,
I
wanted to write you a quick note about Daniel Kedar, who's working in your
department. In recent weeks, he's helped the IT department through several
pressing deadlines on his own time.
We've
got a tough upgrade project due to run over the next three months, and his
knowledge and skills would prove invaluable. Could we please have his help with
this work?
I'd
appreciate speaking with you about this. When is it best to call you to discuss
this further?
Best
wishes,
Skip
This second message is much clearer,
because the reader has the information he needs to take action.
2. Concise
When you're concise in your
communication, you stick to the point and keep it brief. Your audience doesn't
want to read six sentences when you could communicate your message in three.
·
Are
there any adjectives or "filler words" that you can delete? You can
often eliminate words like "for instance," "you see,"
"definitely," "kind of," "literally,"
"basically," or "I mean."
·
Are
there any unnecessary sentences?
·
Have
you repeated the point several times, in different ways?
Bad
Example
Hi
Matt,
I
wanted to touch base with you about the email marketing campaign we kind of
sketched out last Thursday. I really think that our target market is definitely
going to want to see the company's philanthropic efforts. I think that could
make a big impact, and it would stay in their minds longer than a sales pitch.
For
instance, if we talk about the company's efforts to become sustainable, as well
as the charity work we're doing in local schools, then the people that we want
to attract are going to remember our message longer. The impact will just be
greater.
What
do you think?
Jessica
This email is too long! There's
repetition, and there's plenty of "filler" taking up space.
Good
Example
Watch what happens when we're
concise and take out the filler words:
Hi
Matt,
I
wanted to quickly discuss the email marketing campaign that we analyzed last
Thursday. Our target market will want to know about the company's philanthropic
efforts, especially our goals to become sustainable and help local schools.
This
would make a far greater impact, and it would stay in their minds longer than a
traditional sales pitch.
What
do you think?
Jessica
3. Concrete
When your message is concrete, then
your audience has a clear picture of what you're telling them. There are
details (but not too many!) and vivid facts, and there's laserlike focus. Your
message is solid.
Bad
Example
Consider this advertising copy:
The Lunchbox Wizard will save
you time every day.
A statement like this probably won't
sell many of these products. There's no passion, no vivid detail, nothing that
creates emotion, and nothing that tells people in the audience why they should
care. This message isn't concrete enough to make a difference.
Good
Example
How much time do you spend
every day packing your kids' lunches? No more! Just take a complete Lunchbox
Wizard from your refrigerator each day to give your kids a healthy lunch AND
have more time to play or read with them!
This copy is better because there
are vivid images. The audience can picture spending quality time with their
kids – and what parent could argue with that? And mentioning that the product
is stored in the refrigerator explains how the idea is practical. The message
has come alive through these details.
4. Correct
When your communication is correct,
it fits your audience. And correct communication is also error-free
communication.
·
Do
the technical terms you use fit your audience's level of education or
knowledge?
·
Have
you checked your writing for grammatical errors? Remember, spell
checkers won't catch everything.
·
Are
all names and titles spelled correctly?
Bad
Example
Hi
Daniel,
Thanks
so much for meeting me at lunch today! I enjoyed our conservation, and I'm
looking forward to moving ahead on our project. I'm sure that the two-weak
deadline won't be an issue.
Thanks
again, and I'll speak to you soon!
Best,
Jack Miller
If you read that example fast, then
you might not have caught any errors. But on closer inspection, you'll find
two. Can you see them?
The first error is that the writer
accidentally typed conservation instead of conversation. This common error can
happen when you're typing too fast. The other error is using weak instead of
week.
Again, spell checkers won't catch
word errors like this, which is why it's so important to proofread everything!
5. Coherent
When your communication is coherent,
it's logical. All points are connected and relevant to the main topic, and the
tone and flow of the text is consistent.
Bad
Example
Traci,
I
wanted to write you a quick note about the report you finished last week. I
gave it to Michelle to proof, and she wanted to make sure you knew about the
department meeting we're having this Friday. We'll be creating an outline for
the new employee handbook.
Thanks,
Michelle
As you can see, this email doesn't
communicate its point very well. Where is Michelle's feedback on Traci's
report? She started to mention it, but then she changed the topic to Friday's
meeting.
Good
Example
Hi
Traci,
I
wanted to write you a quick note about the report you finished last week. I
gave it to Michelle to proof, and she let me know that there are a few changes
that you'll need to make. She'll email you her detailed comments later this
afternoon.
Thanks,
Michelle
Notice that in the good example, Michelle
does not mention Friday's meeting. This is because the meeting reminder should
be an entirely separate email. This way, Traci can delete the report feedback
email after she makes her changes, but save the email about the meeting as her
reminder to attend. Each email has only one main topic.
6. Complete
In a complete message, the audience
has everything they need to be informed and, if applicable, take action.
·
Does
your message include a "call to action", so that your audience
clearly knows what you want them to do?
·
Have
you included all relevant information – contact names, dates, times, locations,
and so on?
Bad
Example
Hi
everyone,
I
just wanted to send you all a reminder about the meeting we're having tomorrow!
See
you then,
Chris
This message is not complete, for
obvious reasons. What meeting? When is it? Where? Chris has left his team
without the necessary information.
Good
Example
Hi
everyone,
I
just wanted to remind you about tomorrow's meeting on the new telecommuting
policies. The meeting will be at 10:00 a.m. in the second-level conference
room. Please let me know if you can't attend.
See
you then,
Chris
7. Courteous
Courteous communication is friendly,
open, and honest. There are no hidden insults or passive-aggressive tones. You
keep your reader's viewpoint in mind, and you're empathetic to their needs.
Bad
Example
Jeff,
I
wanted to let you know that I don't appreciate how your team always monopolizes
the discussion at our weekly meetings. I have a lot of projects, and I really
need time to get my team's progress discussed as well. So far, thanks to your
department, I haven't been able to do that. Can you make sure they make time
for me and my team next week?
Thanks,
Phil
Well, that's hardly courteous!
Messages like this can potentially start office wide fights. And this email
does nothing but create bad feelings, and lower productivity and morale. A
little bit of courtesy, even in difficult situations, can go a long way.
Good
Example
Hi
Jeff,
I
wanted to write you a quick note to ask a favor. During our weekly meetings,
your team does an excellent job of highlighting their progress. But this uses
some of the time available for my team to highlight theirs. I'd really
appreciate it if you could give my team a little extra time each week to fully
cover their progress reports.
Thanks
so much, and please let me know if there's anything I can do for you!
Best,
Phil
Source: mindtools
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